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25 October 2012 @ 11:18 am
Irresistible  
Story length so far 4703 words
What's going on? second vampire kill
What's coming next? vampires start to hunt for her
State of Lena starting to accept that she has superpowers
Deaths? the pretty vampire Anais
Noteworthy snippet

"What a shame." Anais beckoned me and my legs obeyed, bringing me closer to her. "But I just can't let you go yet. I don't know what you are, I just have to taste."

She put her arms around me and pulled me behind the fire escape, out of sight from the other girls. A curious feeling came over me, as if I weren't the helpless one who couldn't resist, as if Anais was under my spell, and not the other way around. All my fears washed away when she sank her teeth into my neck. Part of me was confused, but deep down I knew everything would be alright now.

Anais made no slobbering noises like Fred had done and she didn't hurt me either. It was a sensual kiss that sent shivers down my spine and warm feelings into my panties. The gangly one stared at us, her mouth open and a look of jealousy in her eyes, but I really couldn't tell if she was jealous of me or Anais.

I felt her knees buckle and I let go of Anais. She slumped over and lay there in the gutter, still like a porcelain doll. Until the air rippled and she dissolved into a puddle. I took a deep breath as the wave of red liquid gushed into me. It left me feeling refreshed and confident. I turned to look at the other vampire as I wiped some blood off my neck. "Do you want a taste too?" I asked.

She backed away further into the alley, horror on her face. I turned and went inside, without looking back. Past the girls with their smokes, who hadn't noticed anything, I went straight to the bathrooms to wash the blood away and check myself in the mirror. Again, I could find no wound, even upon close inspection of my neck. I wondered if that was part of the vampires' powers or my own. I chuckled. My powers. That sounded silly. But I could hardly call it anything else. I had the power to kill and absorb vampires. I stared at myself in the mirror. What the fuck.
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Fizzbitch Preposteronenaomi_jay on October 25th, 2012 11:08 am (UTC)
Ooh, I'm definitely intrigued! I think I prefer this version to the original.
Nathreeenathreee on October 25th, 2012 11:16 am (UTC)
yay! Though this was the easy part: the repurposing of old text. Now I have to start working on the new stuff.
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